See you in a Better World....

[RAMI]

Sounds great.

RAMI when you make it big time can I be your roadie.

Thanx alot Timboz....Hey, you can start by being my groupie for now.

I think I'll have to sell more than 7-10 CD's a week before I hit any big time, though.

 

[RAMI]

Great tune RAMI.....
- nice bass riff in the beginning, excellent tone and clarity
- the guitars are raunchy and set the tone nicely for this rock tune. You riffs are cool in this one...
- I saw the word "love" in the lyrics, so this is a love song by RAMI - cool I knew you had a sensitive side....
- the drums sound fabulous as always. I notice a nice level on your ride cymbal this cut (especially durin gthe bell sound). It's right there but not overbearing as it could be. Nice job on recording.
- Nice dual guitars, the one on the left playing more of that Richard's lead/rhythm I like.
- The tune itself is very well written. It has nice subtle verses then builds up to powerful chorus. The interlude back to the bass is a nice touch as well. I'm humming this to myself as I type......

Thanx again IDO. Hehe...I've always seaid I'll never write a love song in the traditional sense. In this song, the only reaosn I use the word "love" is in the broad sense, not in a "relationship" sense....That would be just plain wrong.

 

[RAMI]

Cool tune, Rami.



Vox still do not have enough definition up to 1:12... you might EQ them and cut some off the low end... then push them up a tad.

Sounds like a fun tune to play. You did a good job on this, in all aspects.

Hey Doug...Thanx buddy. Good advice for the vocal part. That was actually my next idea if people had still said they have trouble hearing the verses. I think it's the lower octave of the 2 that makes them a bit muddy. So now that you mention it again, I'll try cutting some low mids from them and turning them up a notch. Thanx alot.