Say I Love You From The Heart

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A new Song I am trying to get some kinks out of

https://soundcloud.com/renips/say-i-love-you-from-your-heart
Say I Love You From Your Heart
Written by Mark Spinner

Ti voglio bene
I love you
Je suis fou de toi
Aishiteru
Yeah the byah loo bloo
I love you

I love you is said across the world
Many hearts beat as one
Different voices many languages
Coming together as one tone

Say I love you from you heart
Don’t play just a part
Say I love you from your heart
Their not just words or clever art

Ti voglio bene
I love you
Je suis fou de toi
Aishiteru
Yeah the byah loo bloo
I love you

I love you is said across the world
Many hearts beat as one
Different voices many languages
Coming together as one tone

Say I love you from you heart
Don’t play just a part
Say I love you from your heart
Their not just words or clever art
 
good message in the lyrics, but to me, they seem a little apart from the music style. but that's purely an artistic choice.
High mids are coming through clearly, but i think you can fill out the sound with more low end to the mix. Not just the bass in particular, but the mix as a whole. The kick is about the only thing I can hear from the drums. I hear them, but the kick outshines everything else.
 
Thanks for listening. I tweaked the drums a bit and also added some low end to the overall mix.
 
Drums MUCH better and the mix feels fuller now.
It's just a matter of preference from this point, but I still feel it could use more low end.
Also a matter of choice, but you could try centering the bass (sounds like it's off to the left?),
then give it a bit more punch to see if that beefs up the sound more.
 
sammydix said:
Drums MUCH better and the mix feels fuller now.
It's just a matter of preference from this point, but I still feel it could use more low end.
Also a matter of choice, but you could try centering the bass (sounds like it's off to the left?),
then give it a bit more punch to see if that beefs up the sound more.
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I did put the bass a bit to the left. I had it centered. When I was trying things out initially panning to the left sounded good. The bass is also on the right but subtle. You are right. It does come down to reference in the end as long as there are not issues with the mix that detract from it
Thanks
 
Your vocal has a bit of a harshness to it.
Could also be too loud.
 
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