Sail Away - Llarion Mix

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OK guys, I did my mix of the now-notorious Sail Away collab. Let's start with the file, and then my commentary, of which I have a lot.

Llarion's remix

Unfortunately, the "before" version has been removed, I'd have liked to have had it as a basis for academic comparison; But for those who may have missed, it was a product of a compromised mix and EQ curve. It was very shrill, and had virtually no bottom. Randy has a hearing issue that, when coupled with his monitoring environment, essentially amounts to an 11KHz low-pass filter, which he tried to compensate for, and overshot. At least, that's how I heard it.

PERFORMANCE NOTES:
I want to keep this as minimal as possible, because this exercise, at least for me, was not about the performances, and the evaluation/rescue thereof. It is a mixed bag, but from a mix/mastering standpoint, the one thing I did want to mention was the timing/sync issues. I know it can be difficult when collaborating online to keep things in strict sync; but if you start with a universally-distributed click track or drum loop, and everyone does their best to play with as much discipline as possible; it; is possible to get a reasonably synced set of tracks. I could have nudged some things around and corrected some of the more upfront ones, but I wanted to concentrate my efforts on the mix and master, and I wanted to set an artificial limit of four total hours of work to see how much I could do in a limited span.

WHAT DID PHIL DO?

Step one was to rescue the drum tracks, which were rendered mostly bottomless. I individually EQed each track to get them back to as close to acoustically flat as I could. Once that was accomplished, I concentrated on getting the overheads and kick to sound good together. I then colored the snare and brought it into the mix. Then, I edited out all of the ambient sound from the tom tracks, leaving only the actual hits and their ringouts. (I favor doing this, because then I can eliminate any ambient phasing problems between the various close-proximity mics and the overheads. I then found a good EQ and reverb curve for those, dropped it on a bus, and assigned the tom channels to it. The drums are wetter, as is everything, actually, because I needed to try to match the soundstage that True's lead vox channel had set; she recorded it fairly dripping with a plate 'verb.

Step two was the bass part, with suffered from four competing issues; the pick attacks in the upper mids were harsh, the "punch" of the low bottom was gone, and the upper-lows to lower-mids had a wallowy resonance, and the whole track was clipping. Several passes with close-banded 10-band parametric EQs with narrow Qs recovered a good bit of fidelity; I did passes to focus on each trouble area individually. Were I going "all the way" with this, the bass part would have been a re-track.

Step three was the keyboard part; which I left alone save for a volume envelope; the only thing that was needed was the moving part, the pedal C was just muddying the waters, so I faded it out each time.

Step four was Tony's solos, which got minor EQ tweaks, and a reverb patina that brought it closer in the sound field to True's vox. Not much to do there, these tracks were in good shape, as were Gorty's guitars, which needed only level matching in the final mix. (These was one part that had 2 or 3 little licks that didn't fit too well anyway, so that track got dropped.)

Step five was True's vox. The main part for a fatter lower mid, a scooped upper mid, and a fair bit of multi band compression/limiting. True has a VERY big voice, and there were some clipping issues on some of the more "blasty" notes, so I had to be very delicate with the compression there. These would have been a re-track too, only because od the "printed" and excessive 'verb, and some wandering pitch in a few spots (I have Autotune, but did not use it; it's too difficult to be subtle with it, you hear the squared-off artifacts too easily.) The "2nd" part was kind of disjointed in terms of fitting with the first part, so I did a novelty thing with it, I threw a "telephone" EQ curve on it and shot it to the right side, so it's more of a counterpoint/afterthought than an actual 2nd part; there was too much sonic fighting going on.

Step six was adding Dogman's "clean" guitar part in, because it filled in some sonic gaps, and I liked what he was shooting for. I high-passed it, and contoured the highs and upper mids, and matched the 'verb patina in best I could.

Step seven was Randy's main comping guitar part. I turned the mono file into a stereo one; which allowed me to throw a big expander over it, and a gentle stereo chorus to give it some dimension and movement.

Everything else was just tweaks with levels and stuff, and the main stereo mixdown got some limiting, and a gentle EQ scoop in the upper mids to tame a little accumulated harshness in that register (1K to 4.5K).

RANDY, ABOUT YOUR ROOM AND MONITORING, AND OVERCOMING THE HEARING THING:
My main suggestion for you is to tune the monitoring to your ear, rather than tuning the source material to fit your monitoring and hearing challenges... Set the output monitoring EQ to electrically flat. Put in a "reference" CD that you know is a super-clean mix and master, and follows the philosophies you like in your mixes. (I use Steely Dan - Aja, and Supertramp -Breakfast in America, The Bob Mintzer Big Band - Incredible Journey, and James Taylor - October Road for my reference CDs, depending on the genre I'm working in.) LISTEN deeply to the CD, at electrical flat; to hear how your ear is perceiving the room, and the source. Tweak the monitor EQ output so it sounds "right" to you. Now, when you EQ a track, it will also sound "right" to you (and probably very shrill to anyone else in the room with you), but your SOURCE material will have more normal EQ parameters and will sound good on the outside; the key is to tune the MONITORING, not the source. I hope that helps.

Bravo to you guys for collaborating. I hope I've been able to add something to the educational experience with this little exercise. I'm no authority or anything, I just have worked with Randy's material before, and have a good feel for what it usually needs...

Cheers,
Phil
www.llarion.com
 
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Much, much better than the original disasterpiece. I hear drums! :D

My only nits are:
1) There is a lot of bottom end boominess in the bass and kick. The bass is pretty loud too. I think it can come down in volume and low energy.

2) Trues vox sound much better than before, but they're kind of buried in many spots. The tone and processing sounds fine. Maybe they just need a little volume bump.

That's about it for nits. The guitars sound great. Just a little tighter bottom-end and it's good to go. Excellent. :)
 
Much, much better than the original disasterpiece. I hear drums! :D

My only nits are:
1) There is a lot of bottom end boominess in the bass and kick. The bass is pretty loud too. I think it can come down in volume and low energy.

2) Trues vox sound much better than before, but they're kind of buried in many spots. The tone and processing sounds fine. Maybe they just need a little volume bump.

That's about it for nits. The guitars sound great. Just a little tighter bottom-end and it's good to go. Excellent. :)


I tried, my man, I tried. If the bottom on those is much less than it is now, and the body of the main mix vanishes, it's really wild. Try it, pull back 64HZ and 80Hz and see what it does... (Plus, I didn't have time to do a multi-surce test, and my first mix on my main bank is ALWAYS a little tubby until I hear it in the car... :) )

I was deliberately sliding the vox a little underneath in some places, because I could not compress it any tighter without clipping, and I had to work with the peak, rather than the valleys... :)
 
I pulled a little out around 100, and it cleaned up some. Mainly, I think the bass is just too loud. It's pretty sloppy and messy and distracting. I bet you could drop it a db or 2 and it would still be very present but not so overpowering.
 
Although the bass guitar seems a little overpowering in the intro, I find it sits quite nicely during the rest of the song. Lots of cool vocal arrangements going on here...very creative.... I thought there were more leads in the original version - maybe I'm mistaken. I don't have the orig to compare to..
I like what you've done with this mix.....:cool:
 
I'm kinda sorry I missed the original mix after seeing the fireworks that followed . . .

I like the song and the musical ideas contained therein, but it seems the audio damage to the tracks is so severe that they are beyond repair. The phase distortion on the drums in particular is dreadful (I know it ain't you, Maud!). The sync issues in the front are still significant, but seem mostly better by the end. It would be a lot of work to edit or time stretch each track to make them fit again.

Were the original raw tracks not available for the remix? Or had this EQ been printed on the tracks you got? Whenever I see advice like "pull back 64Hz and 80Hz" I get worried, because a 31 band graphic EQ is usually not a tool to fix a mix . . . deep and narrow boosts and cuts can cause the kind of damage heard here.

I liked the vocal treatments :o

I'd really like to hear the track as intended by the performers, since I think it could be quite good. :)
 
Much fuller mix....I also think there is a bit too much low end on the bass, and maybe in the drums. They seem to be fighting for some space there. Maybe thin the bass out some...see if that gives the drums more space...:confused:
 
I'm kinda sorry I missed the original mix after seeing the fireworks that followed . . .

I like the song and the musical ideas contained therein, but it seems the audio damage to the tracks is so severe that they are beyond repair. The phase distortion on the drums in particular is dreadful (I know it ain't you, Maud!). The sync issues in the front are still significant, but seem mostly better by the end. It would be a lot of work to edit or time stretch each track to make them fit again.

Were the original raw tracks not available for the remix? Or had this EQ been printed on the tracks you got? Whenever I see advice like "pull back 64Hz and 80Hz" I get worried, because a 31 band graphic EQ is usually not a tool to fix a mix . . . deep and narrow boosts and cuts can cause the kind of damage heard here.

I liked the vocal treatments :o

I'd really like to hear the track as intended by the performers, since I think it could be quite good. :)

Now that True has the original mix up, you can hear what my starting point was. The rescue on the drum files helped, but I think this is a good object lesson in not messing with the source files, but doing things in aux busses.

You're right about an EQ not fixing the mix, and I was only referring to fractional dB movement in my notion of playing with those two frequencies. It makes a difference in my monitros, but then, I think I may still have a resonance point in that range somewhere in my room I haven't locked down yet. :o
 
Much fuller mix....I also think there is a bit too much low end on the bass, and maybe in the drums. They seem to be fighting for some space there. Maybe thin the bass out some...see if that gives the drums more space...:confused:

I guess I'll have to take a quick swipe at this again tomorrow, my ears are fatigued tonight. I'll try thinning out the bass and kick, and we'll see what comes! :)
 
The bass sounds like it's in stereo with a top only channel & an ultra bottom only channel tracking it just a tad behind.
If this had garagier guitars & less bass it'd almost fit onto a mid period Patti Smith LP - mainly because of True's vox.
Good work all around folks.
 
Now that True has the original mix up, you can hear what my starting point was. The rescue on the drum files helped, but I think this is a good object lesson in not messing with the source files, but doing things in aux busses.

You're right about an EQ not fixing the mix, and I was only referring to fractional dB movement in my notion of playing with those two frequencies. It makes a difference in my monitros, but then, I think I may still have a resonance point in that range somewhere in my room I haven't locked down yet. :o

I see your point . . . you know, the drums are the only thing heavily damaged. Get Mad to resend you his files, and you should be fine.

I like the vocal, I wouldn't retrack that. Maybe try on the second vocal, especially later, to thin it out a bit, and find some 4kHz if there's any there. Just for some definition. The main vocal sounds fine.
 
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Oh. My. God. This. Sucks.


*ducks*

JUST KIDDING!!! ;):D:p

I still like the song, this mix does sound better but the vocals do seem a bit hard to hear but I'm listening through headphones at work so that may be part of the problem.

Nice work guys.

I'd love to get in on one of these collabs when I finish treating my room... :)
 
Phil,

I located the original disc that MadAudio sent to me of his drum tracks. He also included a mix that he had put together of his drums.

I will upload the tracks to my site and send his orginal files to you. I renamed his files to avoid confusion with the previous drum tracks you already have received.

Hopefully, the original drum tracks will prove to be better than what I had sent your way.

Thanks for spending as much time on this as you have on this. It's greatly appreciated.

Thanks also for your advice concerning my room, listening references etc.

I purchased a hose clamp for my mouth, so I'm only all ears (albeit bad ears) from here on out.

I'm off to upload the drum files for you.

:)
 
An act of goodwill.An honest critique.
A bit reverby all around to me. Nothing horrible, just a bit overly processed sounding. Same with the chorus on the guitar. Just a hair too much.
I really dig the drum track.I think the mix should largely be built around them. Well played and recorded. Maybe just a bit more snap on the snare.I'm listening on headphones though, so I dunno.
Bass track is a bit loose in spots. Ideas are fine, performance could be tighter.Sounds like there's a tight drum track, so I would suggest finding the spots where the bass doesn't lock in, and punch in. That or play around and see if you can get a better take.
Vocal has a few uncomfortable spots.Should be obvious enough. No show stoppers, but a punch in here and there would make a stronger track.
See how nice I can be.:)
 
Phil,

I located the original disc that MadAudio sent to me of his drum tracks. He also included a mix that he had put together of his drums.

:)

Cool, I'd like to hear them and work it in; it's always best to have toe original unedited source material....

**tip for mixers** do all your effects as sends; don't print them on the original WAV, you can never go back Don't print till the mixdown...

Did we ever find out where Gorty's solo went?

Yeah, uh, I forgot to stick it in there.. :o

An act of goodwill.An honest critique.
A bit reverby all around to me. Nothing horrible, just a bit overly processed sounding. Same with the chorus on the guitar. Just a hair too much.
I really dig the drum track.I think the mix should largely be built around them. Well played and recorded. Maybe just a bit more snap on the snare.I'm listening on headphones though, so I dunno.
Bass track is a bit loose in spots. Ideas are fine, performance could be tighter.Sounds like there's a tight drum track, so I would suggest finding the spots where the bass doesn't lock in, and punch in. That or play around and see if you can get a better take.
Vocal has a few uncomfortable spots.Should be obvious enough. No show stoppers, but a punch in here and there would make a stronger track.
See how nice I can be.

It is too reverby overall for my taste, but I was mapping to the base precedent that the vox set...

Waiting for the original drum trax to hit my mailbox (they are filtering in as we speak) to see how much cleaner they are than what I rescued.

I'll redo with the original drum trax, I'll add Gorty's solo, and I'll get some whuff out of the bass. I got some stuff coming up, so it may take a little bit.
 
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