Remixed and ready to go (I think).

[STAT1STICK]

A while ago, I posted an untitled track and was told that it wasn't as good as it could have been. Here's the original thread: https://homerecording.com/bbs/showthread.php?t=243658

Now, I have gone through and made some changes and I think the whole mix is a lot better now and it is much more pleasing to the ears. Here's the link for the new track: http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?fid=8362

Give it a listen and please give me some feedback. I would greatly appreciate it.

Thanks in advance!

 

[HangDawg]

You need to shave off some of that high end on the guitars. Holy crap man!

 

[STAT1STICK]

You need to shave off some of that high end on the guitars. Holy crap man!

I did! A lot, actually! Which one did you listen to? You were supposed to listen to the one from LightningMP3, not the other ones.

Awww... You probably heard the right one. Man, I thought I had it this time. Well, back to the drawing board!

 

[RAMI]

Like Hang said, the guitars can be thicker...or less thin.

Besides that, I think everything else sounds good. Sounds pretty heavy.

But when you say "Ready to go"...Are you not going to put vocals on this???

 

[HangDawg]

Like Hang said, the guitars can be thicker...or less thin.

Besides that, I think everything else sounds good. Sounds pretty heavy.

But when you say "Ready to go"...Are you not going to put vocals on this???

I don't even think they need thickend. Just remove some highs

 

[lifes_a_fallacy]

I don't even think they need thickend. Just remove some highs

I agree. The weight is there already (for guitars, anyway)

i like the atmosphere - it kinda reminded me of marilyn manson recordings from ... 5 or so years ago

 

[blkdog7]

It's pretty cool. Kill that high-end and get a singer on that!!

 

[STAT1STICK]

Thanks a lot for all the feedback. I'll go back in and do some further editing on those highs. Just out of curiosity, did any of you hear the original ones I posted in the other thread? I think there was a major change from then to now.

And yes, I do plan on adding some vocals but I don't even have any good lyrics yet. I've been sitting on a good set of words for a while but they don't really match the feel/mood of this song.

Kudos for the Manson reference! I get a lot of inspiration from his older stuff. He may be a douchebag but the man certainly knows how to create a mood. Ever hear some of the stuff from Holy Wood? Awesome work! And John5 is the man!

Again, thanks for the feedback!

 

[lifes_a_fallacy]

Ever hear some of the stuff from Holy Wood? Awesome work! And John5 is the man!

for the most part, the ONLY lineup i always enjoyed in MM was Manson, John 5, and Twiggy.

they have a few good tracks before that linup, and ZERO since, but that was the only era where i really dug it.

i deffinatly hear some Holywood influence in this song though (its what it reminded me of, actually)

Jeordie White (Twiggy) has got some cool stuff with Goon Moon and on some of the nifty Desert Sessions, BTW, if you haven't heard any of it

 

[R.A.E]

Thanks a lot for all the feedback. I'll go back in and do some further editing on those highs. Just out of curiosity, did any of you hear the original ones I posted in the other thread? I think there was a major change from then to now.

And yes, I do plan on adding some vocals but I don't even have any good lyrics yet. I've been sitting on a good set of words for a while but they don't really match the feel/mood of this song.

Kudos for the Manson reference! I get a lot of inspiration from his older stuff. He may be a douchebag but the man certainly knows how to create a mood. Ever hear some of the stuff from Holy Wood? Awesome work! And John5 is the man!

Again, thanks for the feedback!

I did, and its a hell of a lot better. Just a lot of high freqs in my ear at one time on the new one. Besides that it sounds good. Sounds like the kick is getting drowned out a bit too. But it is a big step of form previously.

 

[Jouni]

...This isn't easy for me... I think your guitarsound plain sucks. Sorry.

The tune is great, a bassguitar could add the needed punch, but now the guitar has some low end, but a really grainy high end. A bit blackmetal-ish actually.
Then again, mine are usually said to be "muddy".. I like the middle-ish.
The cleans are nice, but distortion is too far for me.....

 

[Guitarer]

I'm personally like the sound of your distortion...until it gets to the palm muting. It just doesn't have enough crunch.

The song is really cool though, I love the intro.