Rebellionaires

[Stratomaster]

Cool trippy tune-I like the echo on the vocals-neat stuff going on in the backgound those cheapy kinda key sounds-I like the piano too. Some guitar wouldnt hurt ehh?? Some volume swelling echoey slide guitar whale noises?? Doesn't really need it I guess-Not sure about the snare sound-maybe if it was turned down a little...Definetely a unique mood you captured here-glad this tune hung around on the front page....Nice work.

 

[homeuser]

"I'm not looking for a 'market' for my music,"

Hmm... I've read this same though all over the place here lately, this deserves each own thread. Check it out when I start it.

 

[Sen]

maybe someone said this b4 me....song is cool, but that snare needs to back off a little...great work man

 

[Pedullist]

I like the mood of this song, it really alters the way you feel at the moment of listening. Powerful.

I think you can make it better by mixing the snare a bit softer, perhaps add some reverb on it, add some more backgroundnoises, and watch your intonation a bit more when you sing. I know, a perfect intonation on a song like this won't work either (you have to sing it 'lazy' to make it work) but it's just a tad too out of tune at times (btw, I'm anally retentive when it comes to pitch issues, so you might as well ignore me )

I'm too much of a Zappa fanatic to hear anything that sounds like Zappa. However, it does sound like Chroma Key, btw.