These songs are... not exactly my taste.
I actually thought that the sound was quite good though, which was odd taken alongside the admittedly bad performances. I thought that you got a good drum sound, although I would pull back on the kick a bit and its boominess, tune up those toms and then give them some more body, and tame that ride/crash cymbal which I found too harsh-sounding. I also liked the guitar sound. Didn't hear any bass in the mix, so if there was any, turn it up!

The vocals... well, dunno if I could get past the performance there to listen to production...

I really dug the outro of that first tune - that was nicely done.

-Jeff