RE: Song_1 without drums and some WIP

[psneddon]

RE: Song_1 without drums and some WIP

As promised in my previous thread "First Song (Please Listen), here is the song without the drums.

I also have a few more songs I'd like you to listen too, all without vocals (I wish I could sing) and boring drums.

This is a brand new one only a few days old. I quite like this one.

This is one I wrote about 6 months ago and have not completed yet. I has cheesy dance drums and a nasty lead guitar.

They are not as polished as my first but are not that bad either.

Please let me know what you think!

Thanks,
Paul

 

[EndlessCoda]

Desperately Seeking Lyrics...

In my under-educated, both have the basics to be good songs. I think the lack of lyrics and vox really hurts, though. Neither song is really written as an instrumentals. But I understand the problem, I can't write lyrics (as my first post in the songwriting forum does attest) and can't sing. So what's a guy to do? hmm...maybe find a sheila with good vox...

<-peace->

 

[silverhammer]

Man I like that new one!

Man that song would just burn with some vocals on it. I liked the sound and the feel. You don't live anywhere near Kansas City, do you ?

Good Stuff, Silver

 

[psneddon]

Nowhere near, I live in Falkirk, Scotland, in the UK. Would love to find a good vocalist/songwriter to complete my songs.

 

[silverhammer]

That would be a long trip

Dude, I like your style, wish we didn't live so far away from each other. Hope you can find someone to collaborate with and give that song everything it deserves. Good luck, Silver