I liked the track, especially the dark chill kind of feel it has.
The one thing that I actually don't like is the Reverb used in the vocals, it sounds like he is singing in a bathroom. Perhaps this reverb is taking the vocals brightness. Try brightening the vocals so you can bring everything up. Especially the kick.

When brightening the vocals, watch out with the Esses, they may want to stand out, and the singer clearly pronounces a lot of ssss.
And watch out with that delay, instead of putting it on the left, try playing with, creating some interesting rhythmic patterns. Cut and paste phrases, use some effects to make it more interesting, etc..
And also try spreading the intruments more, for a more stereo image
Sorry for my english!
I hope this worked for you, this are just ideas!