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Tricker
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This is something I just freed verbally, or what I remember of it anyways...
Tell me what you think of it...
Okay, Let's go, I've picked up a pad,
and I'm ready to take you on an adventure,
like none you've ever been on before,
so let me grab my keys, slip on your shoes,
step through door and enter by my car,
the ride we about to go on will take to a place,
somewhat near and far, it's far from you
but really it's in your soul mind and heart,
It's a ride through your subconscious,
allowing you to see your own light and dark,
murderous images, fields of roses, and the like
appear as your consciousness begins to depart,
the place your going isn't like the rest,
it's more so a combination of whats left, of the,
things in life that are the worst and the best,
the success, strive, and trife,
the evil and good,
the place I'm taking you is your own afterlife,
or moreso what has became since you've past,
somewhat like the ghost of Christmas, your gonna
be able to see what you missed out on,
and what you did,
as you come on this ride with me, this ride to a place
to show how you've lived
All feedback appreciated
Tell me what you think of it...
Okay, Let's go, I've picked up a pad,
and I'm ready to take you on an adventure,
like none you've ever been on before,
so let me grab my keys, slip on your shoes,
step through door and enter by my car,
the ride we about to go on will take to a place,
somewhat near and far, it's far from you
but really it's in your soul mind and heart,
It's a ride through your subconscious,
allowing you to see your own light and dark,
murderous images, fields of roses, and the like
appear as your consciousness begins to depart,
the place your going isn't like the rest,
it's more so a combination of whats left, of the,
things in life that are the worst and the best,
the success, strive, and trife,
the evil and good,
the place I'm taking you is your own afterlife,
or moreso what has became since you've past,
somewhat like the ghost of Christmas, your gonna
be able to see what you missed out on,
and what you did,
as you come on this ride with me, this ride to a place
to show how you've lived
All feedback appreciated