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panoramical
New member
tell me what you think...
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/atlus_music.htm
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/atlus_music.htm
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azraelswings
New member
Nice, few suggestions
I gave both your songs one listen through, and have a few quick suggestions
Dreams: good song, well-written, liked the guitar very much. I liked your voice also, but I don't think your vox follow the dynamic flow of the song. During the first and second verses, the intensity of your vox fit very nicely, but after that you sound like you're holding back. Particularly since your rhythm is so energetic. In general you sound as though you're afraid to sing any louder. I think the song would sound greater with more present vocals.
Great song, melody, and structure. KEEP WRITING!
I gave both your songs one listen through, and have a few quick suggestions
Dreams: good song, well-written, liked the guitar very much. I liked your voice also, but I don't think your vox follow the dynamic flow of the song. During the first and second verses, the intensity of your vox fit very nicely, but after that you sound like you're holding back. Particularly since your rhythm is so energetic. In general you sound as though you're afraid to sing any louder. I think the song would sound greater with more present vocals.
Great song, melody, and structure. KEEP WRITING!
Monkey Allen
Fork and spoon operator
I couldn't listen to them because:
a) the mp3 selection told me I had to register and
b) the hi fi version did not match my WMP codecs
a) the mp3 selection told me I had to register and
b) the hi fi version did not match my WMP codecs