"Rain"

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Acoustic sounds nice man....I like how the drums come in after 8 bars.....I dig the picking part up high...goood production..harmony on the 2nd verse...excellent idea..I like the simple bass part too..recording sounds good man...mix is nice....electric break...gr8 idea...nice harmonies...soft sound man...nice...good work...strings....cool...nice production for home man...good song structure...witness this mofo...I got nothing bad to say! Pleasant songwriting.
 
Your singing almost reminds me of the boss.

Nice mix overall. Cool tune.

Thanks for the listen :)
 
I pick up on a lot of similarity of rhythm patterns, in the instruments, vocal, guitar, and to some extent the drums. Like it could use some of the parts comming from a bit of a different direction. How about breaking it up some rhythmically, on the guitar, some eights' feel on the drums maybe?
Wayne
 
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