R.I.P. Yolo!!!!!!!! HIP-HOP FROM A 14 YEAR OLD

[Jay V]

R.I.P. Yolo - Listen/Share
*NEW TRACK*
Jay V Songs | ReverbNation
14 year old hip-hop artist Jay V
First post in a week trying to hold back on post and hope people listen more and dont think im just spamming lol
but listen/download/share
i'll really appreciate it

 

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Just saw your other thread before I came across this one.

First I'd say you need a reality check. There is nothing pro about the stuff you are putting out. I'm not saying it's bad, it's just not professional studio quality stuff like you are advertising. I think you would get a lot more out of this forum if you posted these rough tracks and got real feedback on the mix and the effects you are using. Personally I feel like the vocal feels very thin for a hip hop track. There is also too much reverb. You could try double tracking the vocals to make it sound more full, also drop some of the reverb and see how it goes