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esull1985
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Hey, I think this is about my 3rd or 4th lyric post on here. Thanks for the replies on the last one, but what do y'all think about this? Good, bad, neither?
Oh and for the record, this song is entirely depressing, lyrically and musically.
It kinda makes me sad that I could write something so depressing.
Pretty Lies
By Eddie Sullivan
[verse1]
All the fancy houses
built on pretty lies,
will all come hard tumblin' down
one of these days, in due time.
[verse2]
Where they've been, what they've made,
they trade it away like cards.
In this life livin' in the past,
hardens even the softest of hearts.
[chorus type thing]
That's why I wanna do it just to do it,
and not think about why.
To leap off a plane, floating,
deep in the sky...
[verse3]
Time rubbed in our faces,
mirroring our lives.
It's just another of his games,
all based on playing with knives.
[chorus type thing2]
To leap off a plane, floating,
deep in the sky.
And forget all my shallow fears,
that keep leaving me blind...
Is all I ask for before I lay down, alone in my bed
on a cold sunday morning and die.
Oh and for the record, this song is entirely depressing, lyrically and musically.

Pretty Lies
By Eddie Sullivan
[verse1]
All the fancy houses
built on pretty lies,
will all come hard tumblin' down
one of these days, in due time.
[verse2]
Where they've been, what they've made,
they trade it away like cards.
In this life livin' in the past,
hardens even the softest of hearts.
[chorus type thing]
That's why I wanna do it just to do it,
and not think about why.
To leap off a plane, floating,
deep in the sky...
[verse3]
Time rubbed in our faces,
mirroring our lives.
It's just another of his games,
all based on playing with knives.
[chorus type thing2]
To leap off a plane, floating,
deep in the sky.
And forget all my shallow fears,
that keep leaving me blind...
Is all I ask for before I lay down, alone in my bed
on a cold sunday morning and die.