Postrocky track and a Filmic track I would like feedback on

[Whylis]

https://soundcloud.com/block_music/sky-curse-with-added-intro

This is a post-rocky track made on FL Studio. Not sure where to start. Vocal bit is the worst. But mostly I'd like general feed back on how make the production better.

https://soundcloud.com/block_music/dkg

THis track is pretty different, again general feedback I would like....

Cheers

 

[Robus]

Too long with too little happening for me.

 

[easlern]

I listened to the first one, love the drum sound. The first guitar that comes in is a little nails on chalkboardy I think. Really dig the aesthetic overall though. Sounds like a very solid mix to me.

 

[TripleM]

I listened to the first one.

The synth drone and bass aren't in tune with each other. It was noticable in the intro.

Fuzz guitar was kind of a cool sound for a drone. Synth sounds in general were pretty nice.

Drums were a little buried for me.

But like Robus, I thought it was too long and there wasn't enough going on. After a couple minutes, I'd heard enough.

 

[dainbramage]

Listened to the first track. I like it and I didn't find it too long at all. Post rock tracks are "supposed to" be long and droning like that. Great work!

Some tracks seem a bit muddy though. The drums (specifically snare) could perhaps be a tad brighter and have a little more volume. I would also ease down on the grit on your vocals.

The second track wasn't really my cup of tea so I'm not going to comment too much on the sound there.