Possessed by the Spirit of Frank Zappa R.I.P.

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This sounds very good man. I like the sound and mix. I might suggest that the harmonies should be tighter rhythmicly, although it's a loose feel song. It tends to clutter up here and there.

OK, there are issues at 2:25. Obviously drums would help dynamicly. But when those electric comes in, I got sonicly lost. Maybe it's because it's 7 AM, but I think without drums this would be best kept acoustic.

Aside from those opinions, I really liked this.

How about something from the Yellow Shark next? :D
 
Coolio-brothers huh? I play with 2 singing brothers-can't beat it
for harmonies...Good playing and singing-I got no complaints about the mix. Good job!

How about something from the Yellow Shark next? <----Sluice must have been kidding hehe. Imagine "Food gathering..." performed entirely on acoustics! Doah!(actually that could work hmmmm)
 
The lyrics were really deep. I mean WAY deep, like ... like... :D (<--- stop pretending they're deep, you...)

But anyway. The vocals & the harmony could be tighter. I get the feeling, though, that making an ultimate mix wasn't on your mind when you did this thing :D
 
A Couple Of Sonic Issues

VERY IMPORTANT SONG. Now listen, there's a problem at 2 or 3 something...I wasn't paying a lot of attention to the time, okay. Now, when you sing..."THE ERECTION IN HIS SHORTS," you really need to commit to that line. It is the sonic glue that holds this masterpiece together. Maybe add some chorus to that line, and delay the last word like SHORTS....HORTS...orts...rts...ts...s.

This changed my life. Thank you,
:D
 
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