Please Review Intro Track

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SwurVe

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Hello,

I would like some reviews on the mixing job on this track....

The beat was made by DJDizzle so I just mixed the vocals so i need feedback on just the vocals...

I recorded wit a Marshall MXL 990...The preamp i used is a Behringer Eurorack UB1202....From there I just went strait into my soundcard on the computer...I use just the normal soundcard that the computer came with.....I mix with just computer speakers...I dont have monitors yet

I didnt add any reverb because i get some wall echo when i record so I just use that as my reverb...I did some overdubs....I did some eqing and compression....on the final mixdown I used the WAVE's L2 Plugin to sorta master the overall Mixdown of it



Honest Feedback Please

Thank You
 
The music sux! I hate cr-a-p. As for the mix it sounds good here. The vox is well done.
 
Everything seems well balanced as far as volume, panning, tone.

The vocal lacks some punch, energy, conviction; not sure how to say it. Perform it with a little more emotion, stand closer to the mic, get angry or something.
 
The intro was a little dry, but the pickup about 1/4 the way through really got my head nodding to the beat right away. Nice beat!

The voice was great for the music style. Definitely fit in well with the song and you should really persue being a hip-hop artist!. But I agree with Phyl (btw, I love that spelling), it needs to have more "punch, energy, conviction," more emotion.

Also, one last note. As a general rule, you shouldn't rap about rapping, write about writing songs, or sing about singing.... especially if you're going to be egotistical when you do it. No offense, just my opinion. I find lots of artists do that nowadays and I really think its stupid, boring, annoying, and terrible all together. Or when bands make reference to their band name in their song like Limp Bizkit does *shiver*.
 
The snare in the beginning sux. Vocals sound good, but the style and flow needs work. As a metal head who does some rap, I can feel your frustration. Not a bad start.
 
Hé ! I like it..love the voice..nice solid beat behind it.
Tho try not to let the drums sound so "mechanic" as in the intro part with the snare.
I also like the mix.
 
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