Please feedback my new song "Resurrection"

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Benyah

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Theres not much to say about it other than that I have new monitors which I'm trying to get used to, so the mix might not be that good.Other than that it's an ordinary pop song with a catchy hook, so just listen and enjoy and maybe wright me some comments on how you like or don't and why. :)

Resurrection

Thank you. B.
 
I like it - a very tight performance. The bass line is great. The drums sound a little mechanical to me, but they fit the pop style of the music pretty well. Well done :)
 
jmasek said:
I like it - a very tight performance. The bass line is great. The drums sound a little mechanical to me, but they fit the pop style of the music pretty well. Well done :)
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Thank you for taking the time to listen, jmasek.
I know that the drums are a little monotonous but I'm sometimes a little lazy when it comes to programing, I would rather play them myself but since I don`t have a rehearsal room anymore, I can't...!
 
B.

Nice job. I like the real wide image on the Acoustic. All of the sounds fit together very nicely. Mix is outstanding imho. The drums sound ok to me, not too mechanical except towards the end where you do that little hi hat double stroke bit. I bet you can accent that part a bit differently to make it sound more like a real drummer. Great song.
 
ObeseArmadillo said:
B.

I bet you can accent that part a bit differently to make it sound more like a real drummer. Great song.
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I Betcha I can too!! :):) And I will in the next couple of days when I get around to it! Thank you for listening, I'm glad you liked it!!
 
Nice song! Nice sound, too. I like your voice, a bunch!
The only thing I might change is the acoustic guitar in the verses. To me, it takes some attention away from the vocal. Just automating the EQ a bit would help.... you could turn the treble down in the verses, and then back up again when you dont sing. This would help your vocal stand out. Or you could record a less busy part there for the verses. But, this is coming from someone with ADD, so I am particularly sensitive to distractions :-)

Good job!

~Shawn
 
Thanks for listening, Shawn!! You might be right, that the guitar in the vers might be a little distracting, although when I wrote the song I foud it kinda cool, 'cause it does get sort of resolved in the chorus. Mabe I should try and cut the treble a little in the vers like you said.

Ben.
 
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