please critique new song.

[HogansHiro]

Her is my first upload ever...lemme know what you think....we recorded it in one night....tried to make it sound live....thoughts?



I want What Shes Got

yes there is sampling going on...

 

[A1A2]

this one is definitely going onto my playlist. Awsome!
I thought those hand-claps were gonna clap on beat. You should try sampling them and see what happens.
Good one, man

AL

 

[HogansHiro]

Thnx for the input...the clapping was just generic club noise I found on the internet...really can't get a beat or rhythm out of it .... I do appreciate your listening to it .... It was fun doing lyrics that were quite a departure from my folk/alternative style.

I could use any other suggestions/ideas anybody has .... thnx

 

[participant]

girl from ipanema...

sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee-
eeeeeeeeet

smooooooooooooooo-
ooooooth...

Isaaac Haaayes...

Vox a bit off tone, but smooooo--
(you get the idea )

VERY, VERY cool.... guitars are KILLIN' me... loooove it.

Like chrisharris says...

POST LOTS!!


(like rick says...)

thank's!!!!!!!

peace

chad

 

[W.I.S.C.]

The snow is falling and the vicodins are fresh and the tune is feelin so right...I want what she's got if it'll make me play jazz guitar like that!Cool song!Fun lyrics!

 

[participant]

bump...

cuz I loooove it

 

[JR#97]

cool beans. hawaiian shirts, lounges, and drink umbrellas are in order. strat or other single coil guitar?