Play This Song For Me

[Irwin abrigo]

I write in many different genres, this song is in the style of Afro beat, I am in need of any advice towards the overall song (Lyrics and music). like, did I use the title line too much?

 

[spantini]

I write in many different genres, this song is in the style of Afro beat, I am in need of any advice towards the overall song (Lyrics and music). like, did I use the title line too much?

Very nice, Irwin mon. That would be too much if I were sittin' on my couch doin' nothin' . . . But if I were up and dancin', I think it's just right.

 

[Papanate]

I write in many different genres, this song is in the style of Afro beat, I am in need of any advice towards the overall song (Lyrics and music). like, did I use the title line too much?

Great Song - but the vocals refrain gets very redundant - and the vocals are missing something - of course I listened on my Monitors and not very loud.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Very nice, Irwin mon. That would be too much if I were sittin' on my couch doin' nothin' . . . But if I were up and dancin', I think it's just right.

Thanks a lot for the comment, I was wondering if it was okay to post AI created songs here on this forum but now I guess it is not a problem.

 

[Irwin abrigo]

Great Song - but the vocals refrain gets very redundant - and the vocals are missing something - of course I listened on my Monitors and not very loud.

The things you are commenting on maybe because it is AI created the music and vocals. My original lyrics. I think if I should master the song in my DAW it would sound better. Thanks for listening.