Ordinary Working Man (song for your next CD)

[Irwin abrigo]

I really put in a lot of hard work on this song...any one interested please say.

Ordinary Working Man
©2009 Irwin Byron Abrigo

(1st Verse)
My baby been crying
And I think she has the right
For I have been trying
For so long to give her a better life
Trying to do the best I can
But life it treated bad instead
There’s no denying
You know I’ve been trying

(Chorus)
And I want to make my baby happy
I want to do the best I can
I hope someday to be somebody
I wish that you would understand
I want to make my baby happy
I’m an ordinary working man
I’m a working man

(2nd Verse)
I know it not pleasing
For it must have been hurting
Living life with a sacrifice
When all you heard is my voice
Telling you words that sound so good
I could not have given you what you worth
But you know that I love you
And I know that you love me too

(Repeat Chorus)

(Bridge)
If she wants to leave
I tell her to take good care
But if she change her mind
I want her to know that I’ll be there
I’ll be working overtime
Both night and day
To give her the things she always wanted
So she can wear that smile upon her face
(Repeat Chorus)

There’s something that I’ve learnt
Dreams don’t come through sometimes
You gotta work if you want to earn
And that’s what I intend to do right now

 

[nzausrec]

Good shaping going on. It's going to gel with a few tweeks. I just read a quick once thru. Will look closely again later.
Interested in the melody you are working on ... see how the pieces
all fit together.