Opinions..

[geet73]

Some of you may remember this froma little while back. It now has vocals and is mixed better, in my opinion. Any suggestions? I am aware that my vocalist sucks at making catchy vocal lines, his lyrics blow ass too.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/thepremiermusic.htm

It's "Learning to Drown".

Hopefully someone will like it.

 

[geet73]

Anyone? Any suggestions on the mix? Any comments on the song?

 

[mawtangent]

Very impressed with how tight (well-timed) this song is and how much variety it contains as it goes from section to section. The drums are unique and and complex. It sounds really thought out (artsy rock? sort of makes me think of Rush)...yes I think your next priority should be to bring the vocals up to par with the rest of the music...and I don't get the background vocals (sounding like they are being sung 20 feet from the mic). Timing is great...you all must practice a lot.

 

[stoctony]

geet,

Yeah the vocals....uh...yeah. Dude thats an awesome song. Kinda Creed guitar/Shinedown. Very cool song. Right up my alley. The screaming kinof ruins the song. It just doesnt fit. Im no pro but the mix sounds good. I really like the song though. The harmony at the end? Yes and No. Kinda cool but then takes the edge off of the song. I would like to hear the edge kept until the very end. The title is very cool. Couldnt really understand the lyrics so I cant comment on that. Good song overall

Stockton

 

[geet73]

Thank you. We're working on the vocalist. I might start writing melodies for him. An entire verse's lyrics are "just remember my name". :-/ We only practice once a week or so. Our drummer is really good, that's all. Heh.

Any more comments?