Opinions please on hard/stoner rock song

[Hoss]

I recorded this give me some input. URL is http://www.myspace.com/doublewidesupersport
the song is called "Agitation" there are a some mistakes musicianship wise, but I'm more concerned with the tones and mix. I'm learning as I go. I used a fostex 8 channel 4 buss board into a M-audio delta 44.
Drums- 2 octava condensers (MK something as overheads X-Y) and 57 for kick.
Vocals- octava condenser
Everything else the 57
I used DBX 166xl's for compressors and sonar 2.0
Thanks George.

 

[Jouni]

..the mix is better than the musicianship. MUHAH, sorry, that was evil. Musicianship not too bad for that sort of music.

Cymbals IMHO could be up a bit.. nice bass tone, but completely buried by vocals and guitar at start. Man they start LOUD.. maybe a bit lower on both and let the bass and drums have some room?
Singer on tune, guitartone fit to this.

Cool song.

 

[rayc]

Bass needs some definition & a bit of a boost.
The vocals are just a tiny bit too loud & the solo at 1.12 needs to be louder - I'd also move it to DEAD CENTRE for it's duration because it's an excellent tone & moves along well enough to feature.
Good groove, riff & hell, I don't know why musicianship is an issue - this sounds like a BAND.
Cool

 

[Hoss]

Thanks for the tips. As I said I'm still learning. Honestly, my tracks are coming out better than I expected cosidering my experience and equipment. I'm thinking about adding a studio projects B1 to my arsenal and maybe and a lexicon effects unit. Anyone use either? Thanks again. I'm heading out to the rehersal space to make more noise. Later all.

 

[faderbug]

yep, the bass is all over the place and should be more focussed, vocals should be more up front. i would give the rythm guitars a bump around 4000-6000 Hz, just a bit to give them some more bite and definition.

man, you guys sound ANGRY!!!
good one!

cool myspace btw