Opinions on mixing this hook with the instrumental?

[rountrjf]

Here is the isolated vocals with a harmony part together.
https://soundcloud.com/joshuairl/flossin-christmas-hook/s-z8Cml

Here is the track mixed with the instrumental beat behind it.
https://soundcloud.com/joshuairl/flossin-christmas-hook-vocals/s-0Gtga

I'm looking to get opinions and what some of you may change or think could be improved...?

 

[Pinky]

Besides being the type of music I find overwhelmingly repugnant, I think the vocals fit fine with the beat. They're a little too crisp and some EQ trimming would probably resolve the slight sibilance. I'd also add a touch of reverb, but exactly what patch and to what degree will depend on the final music/mix.

 

[Kirby777]

I had to look up "flossin" in the Urban Dictionary... and I still don't understand what it means! (I assume it's not about Dental care.)

This is rare for me to say, but in this case I would turn down the vocals because they take all the power out of the background beat. Because the vocals are so well-recorded, they would still be heard clearly at lower level. (Flossin isn't something dirty, is it?)

 

[ahcvankampen]

The low end seems a little blurred......