One more time

[spiderhead30]

So a while ago I posted a song, and I got some responses, advice about compression and reverb. I took that to heart and this is a link to a redone version.

Even if you didn't hear the first time, let me know what you think this time

My equipment:
Ibanez Acoustic electric
Sm57
Roland VS880 Digital 8 track
shitty keyboard synth

Link:

 

[danny83]

Good mix, nice levels on everything. Sounds pretty good...if I were to suggest anything I would say to put a little more variation in your voice (assuming that you're singing). Although you're singing on key, the timbre of your voice and the annunciation of your lyrics give it some monotone characteristics. Other than that, cool song. Cool acoustic and strings breakdown, fits the song great.

 

[spiderhead30]

Thank you. My vocals are my weakest link, and have become my project. I am getting better with time though.