Cool, man. Here are my thoughts. It's late, and I've been mixing clients' work all day, so my ears might be on the fritz, so take these with a grain of salt.
1. I think the snare is being plagued by combing effects. It's probably out of phase with the overheads. I'd try to line them up, if you're familiar with how to do it.
2. There's something going on with the overheads. I'm not hearing nearly as much hi-hat as I am cymbals, and the way they were recorded, I should be hearing a lot more hats and a lot less cymbals. Because...
3. The crash cymbals are too loud. I can hear the crashes plain as day, and the snare gets lost in the mix often (probably due to the 'out-of-phase-ness'). This shouldn't happen.
4. My ears are shot, and I'll take a fresh listen to this soon, and probably find that everything I'm saying is a load of horse-pucky.
Got nothin' but love for you guys. Keep at it. I love doing drums for your music.