Okay... got a rough version of the more complete song... *opinions needed*

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Ah I see. It's an instrumental piece in song format, rather than a song to be sung.

For me, I am not sure the drum kit works. It sounds like a harpist mismatched with a pop drummer somehow and I found myself distracted from trying to follow the melody by the drums. But that's just me. Maybe percussion would be better than a standard kit?

Otherwise I think it works OK but not one of your best pieces (yet). Of course with more work you may move on it on somewhere else. :)
 
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