Nothing to Say (remix)

[mark skinner]

Hello , here is another dropped "d" funk instrumental. This is pretty much a test project using the new "free tier" Sonar by Cakewalk. No surprizes and everything worked as it should. Still .. any crits or suggestions are welcomed. Thanks .. mark

https://soundclick.com/share.cfm?id=15048216

 

[dobro]

You make this stuff sound easy. I think it is, for you. Super-quick rattling drum fill just before 2.00 - might be more effective to go the opposite way and be super-simple. Just one hit, or maybe two. Whatcha think?

 

[Papanate]

I got to listen to it a few more times - initial thoughts are the recording is well done - interesting stereo spread on the parts - really makes everything pop - only thing I can say is the playing is a little loose - is that the style you were going for?

 

[mark skinner]

@dobro , I agree about the drum part. I adjusted it , sounds and flows a lot better. Thanks for the suggestion. I made some slight adjustments to a couple of the same feeling parts earlier in the song as well. I also backed the reverb off a little on the lead guitar. The link now reflects the changes.
@Papanate , Thanks for the listen and response.

is that the style you were going for?

Nope , I play as tight as I can , and what comes out comes out .. ms

 

[dobro]

It's not loose, it's fluid. I agree about the good separation in the mix, though. Do you mix in mono and then hit the stereo button near the end?