newbie.. what do yall think about my beat?? (it won't let me delete this 2nd post)

[bhubbs]

i just got fruity loops like a week ago, so now i'm messin around with all this. i sampled the same "oh girl" song that paul wall did. still kinda choppy, but let me know what y'all think..

-b

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=564621

 

[RobertN]

how can anyone rap to that? It has a delay in the sample you didnt sample it right. try again