newbie mix

[pepsodent]

hey guys, just new here. please check this out, my dad gave me the tracks for me to practice on, i think i will have some of your opinions before i show to him. thanks! its the ending of a song, and please do critique. this is my first try to mix anything. thanks!

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=419667

 

[4NEK8ER]

For what it's worth in my noob opinion the kick drum is way too loud.

 

[emergencyexit]

Bass drum its way to loud on my speakers. I don't have much to say about anything else besides that the guitar is a little bland, but I'm not sure what you should do, or what you can do. I'm new to this too.

Ben

 

[chadsxe]

Sounds more like punk to me.....

Shoot if you call it punk then I think its damn near perfect....

 

[RAMI]

I think a few people woke up in a bad mood today...The bass drum is a bit too loud, but besides that, it's not bad. It's hard to criticize if we don't know what you had to work with.

 

[pepsodent]

thanks anyway, guess need to practice more..

 

[RAMI]

thanks anyway, guess need to practice more..

We ALL do. It never ends.

 

[pepsodent]

that's cool.. thanks!

 

[emergencyexit]

Oh, sorry if I sounded harsh dude I just really have like no idea what I am talking about and I dont think you should take my advice really I only gave it cause I noticed no one else was and on this board people tend to post more after one person has said something... They feel more safe I guess.

I also just posted something myself and I was just a little worried about how people are gonna like it, since I'm young and I suck and all. haha sorry man

Ben