Sounds good man! Though i'll be honest, there's things I like and don't like about the mix. Vocals seem a bit out front to me and the drums, the snare sounds a little dull and something about the toms, maybe its the tuning, I'm not sure but they sound weird to me. I just started recording real drums myself, and yours sound better than mine so who am I to say. The bass sound is great and I like the chimey guitar and keyboards as well as the song and arrangement. Good job man!
already covered my thought.
got this at 1 o'clock (loud) bass sound is great.
Song is very cool.
Tame them drums.
I like cutting edge vox so to me they are fine. love that bridge. piano and falsetto work well. nice vox arrangement.
some white noise on the fade but I guess you like white noise kev
I agree the snare and toms sound a little weird. Especially the toms. The snare is passable. The whole mix gets sloppy when the toms roll.
There is a clean-ish electric guitar on the left that plays some accents every now and then in the verses. It's a little pointy.
The mix is a little narrow. The instruments on the edges don't play constantly. It leaves a lot going on in the middle.
Drums. Rest sounds really good. Vocal especially. I agree with 3M that things get weird when the toms go off. It's just muffled, no attack or tone really. And the snare has zero snap, just a thud. Although it's not the case, it sounds like it's low passed down to 600hz or something.
Overall, like it. Vocals seem at the right mix for the song. Maybe some air on the vocals, but that is a judgement call. I hear the snare, I liked it at first, then after more into the song, it wasn't working as well.
Other than that, good song, nice changes, good playing. Good stuff.
Rebuilt the drums from scratch. New mix on link.
snare is much better. toms are better overall, though still a bit washy in the tail. a lot better than before though. it's funny how much the snare sound determines the mix. i'd turn the toms down a little, especially near the end where they pick up.
Listening to the remix. Vocals are VERY nice, but the first couple lines are tentative. You have a very nice falsetto.
Toms may still be too wide.? I really like narrow drums, so that's a grain of salter there...agree that they're just a little too prominent in the mix, but it's your mix.