2:27-->2:32(ish)...lighting issues. Cannot see the artist's face and/or backlit by something brighter makes it hard to see the person. Color correcting could make it a lot better. There's a weird blue hue over everything except a couple of shots. The shot @ 2:47 has the best color/contrast of the entire thing IMO. If the whole thing had this color/contrast depth, it'd look a lot better and more overall coherent IMO.
Otherwise...pretty good given the lack of knowledge on creative direction you wanted to go.