*NEW TRACK* Pockets on Swole

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this is just a quick joint me and my boy Supa Star did to a mainstream beat......

its on my myspace page iown know if u gotta be a friend to peep....... i dont think so..... but if u do add me and ill add u back

www.myspace.com/thafamillyfyre

First Verse = Supa Star
Second Verse = Me Fyre aka Corleone
 
i already told you that shit is hot son but i'll post a comment since no-one else will lol
 
My bad fam didnt even notice this thread I kinda like dis better than Bull city Anthem and thats high speaking
 
It may be myspace, but that beat is mixed HORRIBLY. Makes it difficult to listen to this track, seriously, it's painfull...

First dude is aight, flow is on point. But he ain't dropping anything to make me pay attention.

Fyre, ya flow is nice. Rhyme schemes is nice, voice fluctuations is good, keeps the verse interesting, you real good with ya empahsis points. That phone effect on ya verse is mixed in badly, though. Fix that.

Good track.
 
thankx for the feedback.... to let you lknow i wasnt responsible for the beat my boy star just sent it to me as a mp3 so i couldnt really help the quality....... plus im not that good at mixing yet....
 
Damn, Change your tough! LOL


I wouldn't necessarily use the word "HORRIBLE", but I didn't listen to it in a good system anyway.
I thought it was okay, but who am I to judge? Maybe I am easily pleased, 'cause I am just an old RnB cat who loves hiphop.
 
thankx for the reply.......

and its all good at Change i like when people are tuff on me it makes me work harder.... if everyone just said "man I like this track" I wouldnt get anywhere or grow as a artist, producer, or engineer.......
 
Fyre said:
thankx for the reply.......

and its all good at Change i like when people are tuff on me it makes me work harder.... if everyone just said "man I like this track" I wouldnt get anywhere or grow as a artist, producer, or engineer.......
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Nooooooooo doubt!
I'm just messing with him.........Being heavily critiqued is all good, especially if you don't take it to heart. (And I know you didn't) But as you search for people's opinion be your worst critic! I remember when I had did something mediocre and someone thought it was hot, but someone else thought it was garbage. I came to grips with the fact that it should have never been posted! I shouldn't post something I am not proud of, unless I am just searching for ideas. That is why you guys don't see many posts of my work, I do alot of producing on other peoples projects. But soon, I will be launching work of my own............
 
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