New Track - Please Listen

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I am gonna record the backing vocals again tomorrow. The general view I have got from people is that they spoil it. Anyway, tell me what you think.

Lyrics

Absence of understanding and I,
I hold you tight;
A metaphorical clinch with you,
With you.

Please shower me,
With your deepest of understanding.

And if you cry,
Please remember that I,
I have a way with words.

Do my cliches make you smile?
I think they did for a while.
Muddling through the bureacracy of love.

I love you so much.
I don't think it's quite enough.
To pull us through
And this love song, won't make a difference to me or you

Love itself,
It's a synonym,
For: "I fucking hate you".
If I realised this a week ago,
Maybe you wouldn't be sleeping,
On a pillow that's soaking wet.


And as I looked up to the sky,
I knew that everything was alright,
In the red corner you'll cry,
And now I saved myself, I saved myself from a lie.
 
Back ups really fill up the song and keep it interesting - keep 'em. The guitars could be more "up front" - they seem mic'd back a bit. They need a little less low mids. This is just my 2c and I'm no pro so keep that in mind. The lead vocals are nice - that's quite a high range you have there. Everything balanced pretty good for me.... :D
 
Thanks for the comments. I am gonna take out some of the backing bits, and maybe spice up the lead guitar a bit.

Thanks for the comments, I will look at the guitar tone.
 
Is this supposed to be a comedy song?

If not, then you have got to do something about it...it made me laugh, and that's probably not a good thing.
 
Nevermind, I see that you're British, it makes sense now.

The "accent" threw me in the song. It's very, very, prominent. It isn't a bad thing, but in all honesty I thought it was "fake", hence, why I thought it was "comedy".

Sorry bud!
 
lol... ahh... no I am English yeah... so the accent should be there.
 
Sammy, your recordings are getting better and better. The second version is more effective, I think. The backing vox have a good sound - all they need is a little more rhythmic tightness I think. Pretty nice guitar sound in this. More of the lead acoustic guitar throughout the tune would be good too IMO.

Tim
 
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