New to Forums - Feedback on some instrumentals

[SaberBeats]

Hey im new on these forums and decided to post up a few instrumentals that i have worked on recently, its not by any means done, but would like some feedback as to what ppl think of these tracks

my style is what i grew up listening to - rob the viking (from swollen members) and other guys that had a similar feel

so i just stick to the old school percussion with some strings and classical influences - the stuff i grew up on

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-tHsfPGqCcM

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and heres a mixdown i did of karl jenkins - palladio,

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tMKoWpfB_3o&feature=channel

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enjoy and apprezz any feedback

 

[jlewis]

I like the first one, nice and laid back. Something about the second one I'm not feeling as much but it's still good. It might be the bass, maybe a different bass line would compliment that sample better. Also give these songs an ending of some kind instead of stopping them mid-beat, I thought youtube stopped loading, but turned out the song was over. Keep it up

 

[gullyjewelz]

feelin the first one. decent track. does have that old school feel to it . . but not as t hough its a bad thing. git in where u fit in! keep doin that~!