new synthesizer rock

[semidiablan]

tell me what you think--it's not quite done, thanks...

i think i want to rewrite part of the 2nd verse.

 

[fasterthanu]

i like the vocal, it suits the song and sits well in the mix. I'd consider tweaking the drums perhaps. i'd like to hear the kick beefed up a bit, the psp vintage warmer or something like it used with an agressive gain setting might sound nice. The snare seemed a little mechanical, but perhaps thats what you wanted. Overall good track kept me interested.

 

[semidiablan]

I agree about the kick, I'd like it to be heavier... As for the snare, yes I do want it to sound mechanical, but maybe I will mess with its pattern a little to give some variation.

anyone else?

PS: as I was recording some more vocals for this song I had a whisper get recorded in a silent area. I've had suspicions of my place being haunted but this confirms it...