i like the vocal, it suits the song and sits well in the mix. I'd consider tweaking the drums perhaps. i'd like to hear the kick beefed up a bit, the psp vintage warmer or something like it used with an agressive gain setting might sound nice. The snare seemed a little mechanical, but perhaps thats what you wanted. Overall good track kept me interested.
I agree about the kick, I'd like it to be heavier... As for the snare, yes I do want it to sound mechanical, but maybe I will mess with its pattern a little to give some variation.
anyone else?
PS: as I was recording some more vocals for this song I had a whisper get recorded in a silent area. I've had suspicions of my place being haunted but this confirms it...