New Soundtrack-esque Composition

[trb94]

I put this composition together using Cubase this summer and wondered if you guys had any feedback/advice.

It is for 2-4 marimbas, violin, cello, bass, chorus, and percussion.

https://soundcloud.com/tom-bacon-5/first-movement

Thanks!

 

[joro]

I like it....
there is one thing that I don't like though.....there is a high hat sound from 2:10 to 2:44 that just doesn't fit the piece.
I could see this as a soundtrack for sure.
It is all midi....right?

 

[trb94]

Thanks, it is all midi...and it needs some further tweaking to add a more human element. I made it exploring some of my new VST instruments (kalimba, chorus, and other african percussion) so I understand if a few of the instruments are a little haphazardly placed like the shaker from 2:10-2:44. Thank you for listening!