New Song! Would Love to be Critiqued

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Oh yeah, you guys listen to Slipknot a lot don't you.....:D
The guitars have a certain "roomyness" about them (reverb?), they could do with a bit less of that. The drums are the weakest point though. Listen closely to Joey Jordison's kit for reference. The kick needs a lot of click and the snare should be pretty high-pitched. The performance is pretty good though, especially the guitar riffing.

Joey :)
 
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The guitars sound way too roomy. If that is a plugin, take it off. Same thing with the vox. They sound like they were recorded with the mic six feet away. The drums sound super low quality and programmy. I can't really hear the bass's definition. Decent riffs though.
 
Good playing. Not my genre, but the performances seem pretty good.

The mix leans to the left. The guitar over on the left is louder than anything on the right.

The "melodic" vocals are kind of buried. There is also a strange ambiance on them. It sounds a little unnatural.

The drums are OK, but sound a little "machine gunnish."
 
Gave it more of a listen than some other songs that pple seem to like more. I like yours for the vox. and the crunch rthm gat.
 
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