damm thats a first - the melody was good? sheit!!! thats definitely a plus for me! i was thinkin that the drum patter was better than the melody . . . cwhatiknow
drum pattern was good, im just sayinga ctual drum selection, the note chosing was good justc hange up teh instruments to something more cool sounding, try sitars instead of that guitar.
No doubt, tighten up those drums, quantize them. Also, change the velocity on each of your snare hits, that will give them a more "real drum" feel. The melody was dope maybe add a touch of reverb to smoothe it out and blend a little more, just a touch.
Thats whats up, I posted up a couple of beats that I kinda threw on the back burner (for now anyway) just so you can get a feel of what I'm talking about, the snare hits in "Flipped 1" are all at different velocities which really helps them sound closer to being real rather than a drum machine...here's my soundclick link...check the drums on Flipped 1 first, they almost sound sampled.
ok thats whats up . . . i really like the music u used on it - - i can hear the "difference" in the snares . . . now i gotta find "velocity" as an effect on the triton . .
loved the melodies on this,,,the drums need to be tightend but overall,,,could be a killer with the right flow,,,had my head nodding my nig,,
the main melody should go through the whole song,,insetd of all the change ups,,,still good shit tho
thanks im gon be workin on it again, probably not till new years eve . . . lol wit my school and two jobs and other collaboz and tryin to start up a new "band" . . . im trippin!!!
Gully Gully Gully, muh boy. I aint got much to say because they pinned it all right.
You know what you gotta do homie, keep it comin' I'm diggin it.
I been busy as heeellll. Workin' on a website for my production, as well going to college from 7am til 5pm monday-friday, and workin' on websites for different companies, I'm redoing http://www.youthdynamics.org website as we speak!...
Maaayne it's busy.
nevertheless, you be busy and still be poppin', that's how you do it man.
I check back in later to hear some more from you I'm sure of it.
got the verse writen - thought i was gon git it done this weekend - but a tree - yea -a frikkin tree - fell on my house!!!
should be able to resume normal by Saturday - i hope to be in the studio - as long as teh last crew comes in tomorrow to finish up - i should be straight!!
will let you know though