new song....ready to be critiqued

[Hermanator]

heres a new recording from the band standin 8 count....if you would give me a critique of the music we'd appreciate it.....
just to be aware it's done at 128kbs in mp3 format for speed...
thanks,...the new song is called merely a man.......]

 

[ZPphreak]

The vox are a bit too wide for my taste. It seems like centering them with the FX panned out would be more effective. this way wou can still hear the 2nd vox track... just my opinion of course though..
Rock ON!
-Brent

 

[B.SABBATH]

bottom line,

vocals too loud, rhythm guitar too low..

 

[W.I.S.C.]

I like angry music.This is raw and pissed off,like the sh*t I first started doin' as a serious musician.Vox too loud...decent recording ,lots of air.Lyrics kinda weak.but it's supposed to be that way .I get it.So that stupid b*tch you wrote this to can understand it.Hey you even ask her if she does! good Lead guitar ,shreds!