New song, need feedback in all areas!

[mrhotapples]

How's the mix?

And structurally, I'm not entirely happy with the ending, but it's all I could come up with for now. If you have any ideas, feel free to share.

Here is my space!

 

[g0dmoney]

try hosting on like lightningmp3.com... this link is super slow.

 

[mrhotapples]

I replaced the link with the myspace I made. Please feed back at me!

 

[baker_]

The kick sounds overcompressed, but i will say it is cutting through.

The guitar panned left drops out around 1:01. It's distracting

Great guitar work though.