New song Lyrics "The Invasion"

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These are the lyrics to a new track Im working on which is the sequel to DZK's song "The Epic"

I've goten concent from DZK to preform the sequel.

What do you think of these lyrics?

( For those of you who don't know, The Epic is a horrorcore rap track about two immortal beings creating chaos through time endlessly, The Invasion, the sequel is the same two beings moving from a different dimension and conquering our world )


The epic - "Invasion"

When war begins my hordes formed within the storming winds
Their leaders gruesome engorging fins swarming in the forging tin
which pours from thick cords of mortal sin stored within that forced his
sword's grim core of orbs to spin exposing warped doors within every
pore and limb that explored his skin.

His lungs would inflate in ways that displayed warped gateways that laid
engraved on the flamed blades he used to slay his insignifigant prey
That now lay flayed and porrated in a gory grim display of dissarray.

o escape him they offered offerings, but the basket they flipped the coins in
We're actually poised caskets as wrapped in the flapping wrappings of a cadaver's voice
spinned slapping poison across their faces like a rat's accurate rapid slashings across
the lips their husbands once found joy-in.

He was viewed like a metal moon on the horizon
A dmeonic design striving for the demise of any many who would glide-in
TO the sight of his wild eyes which reflected his tyrant guise of a mighty spite and lies
which burned like two fiery fires that mmoved with the grace of a pride of lions
and all compassion seen inside died when they opened wide- darting side-to-side like
a violent red-tide of violence.

The horde was remorcless a scavaging pack of corpses ontop of horses
Which moved like an evil whim from the forest from within a fortress where their powerful force-is
They drug the purest forms into scorched pits where they melted their faces and torched it
and within what should have been their swords-grip, hung the swaying heads of the poorest swordsman
whos only means of identification was the dangling mangled portions of its forskin within it's torn-fist.
Within that towering city of thorns the doors lit aglowing the glimmering skulls that adorned it.
And from it poured an ebon horned cliq who broth in the wickedness of crafts
as their dark master preformed it.

Their brains ravaged with savagry yet with an adaptry to computers
Poured forth the cruelest beasts from the pantries and sewers
and how quick they slew the losers with such spastic an gnashing moneuvers
proved to the persuers that attacking would leave them skewered.

They swarmed the city as quickly as air did flow
amd collapsed the walls around the townsmen like how it was found-in Jericho
As the onlookers stared no beast dare spare his foe but with one blow
thick black mats of hair were thrown-
Way to reveal a sadistic an splattering mess of hexed blades piercng the vests and vexing the dressed
and making a chest's suade flesh mimic mesh & through this thick grotesque net of death
roared a breath that commanded the creatrues to leave those go who were left
So each of the dogling hybrid pets lept over the bodies an broke the crest
of the compasses as they continued their bloody quest west.
As night fell still blood drept the from bed, room and desk
as symbiotic flies built nests within the wounds of those who slept
and began to once again infest this city of flesh.
 
That... was... AWESOME!


The only thing in my mind was when you said,"Violent red-tide violence".

I think it's a little redundant.

In one line you said 'drug' when correct wording would have been 'dragged'. I think listeners will respond more quickly to that word.

I got slightly confused with whom you were referring to in the two lines that ended with, "...leave them skewered".



I've never heard rap like this before. Where can I buy a CD with material like this on it? Are there any popular artists that do this?
 
Thanks!

Not many people do this type of rap, its hard to pull off.

The style is called HORRORCORE

Not to be confused with ICP ( yuck)


My crew is diverse in their styles, Im the only member who spits this type.

But if your interested in people spitting similar styles, I can only thing of two.

DZK

www.soundclick.com/dzk

and warcloud

Hes a member of wu-tang clan/the black knights, he can be talked to at www.theart-ofwar.com Hard tog et ahold of his tracks though due to his producers and contracts.

So you liked this piece?
 
Oh yeah! I love the imagery. In KC, I don't meet many good rappers and I hate the stuff on the radio. I dig Outkast and what Bone Thugs were doing when they were around. I like the way they do more interesting rhythmic patterns in their delivery. Honestly, I'm not a big rap fan but, I like these lyrics. As soon as you have something to listen to, let me know. Send a message to me.
 
Very creative lyrics. I'm impressed. I suspect I would be even more impressed if I actually heard someone be able to spit all those phrases out without tripping over a word (perhaps many words).
 
I got slightly confused with whom you were referring to in the two lines that ended with, "...leave them skewered".
^^ It was reffering to the people trying to ward off the invasion
 
doubler said:
I got slightly confused with whom you were referring to in the two lines that ended with, "...leave them skewered".
^^ It was reffering to the people trying to ward off the invasion

Wouldn't that mean that 'defending' rather than 'attacking' would leave them skewered?

Just a suggestion. :D
 
Thanks for your input fire!

Your the man
Props to every one else who took the time to read this
ecording for this track will be underway soon for those of you wanna see if I can spit this flawlessly :)
hahahaha

And as far as the defenders like goes

This is a two man song, I only posted my verse ( its a long track)

And the other emcee: R4G3

Will be spitting alongside me, and his verse focuses on the people defending off the beasts/beings, and counter attacking
 
Thanks muchos guys

Would you like for me to message any of you when this song is completely done?

We havn't really even started it yet-- still working with the lyrics and designing the song format, and how we want it to come across as.

but I would be moe then willing to alert anyone who is interested in hearing it when it is actually done. Hell, more exposure for me right? lol

Once again, all of your input is greatly appreciated.
 
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