New song ideas

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notredamer0789

Nashville Rocker
Hey guys... my band and I stayed in the studio for a couple of hours yesterday just playing around with ideas. So we layed out a little plan for this song (doesnt have words yet) and got it down in Pro Tools. I know some parts are off a bit and we still havent mixed it WELL and added everything, but tell me what you think! PLEASE by all means.. rip it apart if you have to lol. :D

http://www.lightningmp3.com/live/file.php?id=11905
 
Sounds very good to me. Can't wait to hear it with lyrics. Maybe you could do something about too much crime in the city and wanting to leave or something. But the sound is GREAT!
 
Sounds cool.

If you have two guitarists, I wouldn't have the acoustic playing the same notes as the electric. That got boring pretty fast. The intro felt a bit long. Unless you're going to sing on it, make it shorter IMO. Other than that I think it sounded very good. Poppy and simple. Good song.:)
 
Thanks guys! Yes the intro will ALSO have a verse in it, but still we may shorten it. I REALLY REALLY want AS MUCH feedback as possible. We will def. work that acoustic part out Erockrazor... thank you for that ;)

Thanks again guys!
 
I guess no one else wants to listen :( lol... SOMEONE PLEASE CRITIQUE!
 
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