New Song - 'I Will' (feedback appreciated again!! :))

[daveskey69]

hi there. me again. Dave from London. thanks to those who gave me feedback on the last song i posted. (and hi to you garry..good to see ya still here. i remember you..do they still do that first thursday thing?)
Anyways, this is a little number called I Will. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=395943 Again, this was recorded on my fostex MR-8 with my martin acoustic mic'd up and my gibson acoustic DI'd.
i am using a cheap peavey mic cos thats all i had, and a homemade pop shield.
everything was mixes in adobe audition.
again, feedback is appreciated. i put the song at Soundclick this time so people could just tream it instead of having to download it.
Again, feedback is very much appreciated.
Respect
DAVE

 

[daveskey69]

dang it..just listened to the stream, and it cuts out like right at the end..dunno why..anyways, what does anyone think anyways?...

 

[Dogman]

Very cool, almost Dylan vibe to the song. A few plosives here and there, but the vocals fit the song really well. I like it..
Ed

 

[Moving]

Nice song and I think good recording... those falsettos work great...

 

[daveskey69]

thanks for the feedback...can't wait till i get a decent mic.
keep it coming guys..