new song feedback

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dalley

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I'm currently working on a CD with a musician friend of mine and have almost completed a new tune. I'm just interested in getting some comments about production so far but song feedback is welcome as well.

The tune has a mellow STP/Pink Floyd feel to it, which is not my style but fun to record & mix nonetheless. Check it out, its about 7meg...thanks

 
ez drummer? maybe try more variation.

The acoustic guitars sound pretty nice. Mixed to what I hear to be perfectly. The vocals are fitting nicely right now at :58. The song is nicely written and sound good overall.

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Dave
 
I instantly liked the sound when the song started.
I don't think the drum track is that bad. It is a bit to perfectly played and the hits are all the same velocity. I would like to hear a quick drum break thrown in once or twice.

I like the guitar tones, very full and this song allows it.

I'd rather hear the wind/wave start the song just a 1/4 to 1/2 second before the music so it has some time alone.

The vocal sound is rich but I think it could use a tad more around 5k and a medium band raised around 14 to 15k to make the vocals a tad more breathy.
The sound nice as is but could sound nicer.
Production wise I would retrack a couple of vocal parts. I also think I'd duck the vocals down a bit in a couple places near the end.

Very cool tune! love the mellow vibe. It's sounding very nice too.

Well I gave you a mixed bag :o

F.S.
 
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