New Rap/R&B song NEED CITRIQUE!!

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Nice job. You might be able to get away with a little more sub bass.
 
I agree... Definitely nice job! And yeah, can use more low-end.

Also, I like to hear a little bit of chest resonance/low-end warmth on vocals, but that's just personal taste.

Overall, I'm pretty impressed though!
 
hey i listened in lo-fi.

lol for some reason, it reminded me of michael jackson. i don't know why, it's not really the style, i think it's your voice and just the way you prounce some words. maybe

but i kind of wish i could listen on hi-fi, cause it sounds really cool. it's like one of the rare songs where that type of synth actually doesn't sound too cheesy.

i like the chorus, and at 3.25 is really cool i thought, the way the instruments slowly build up.

yeah, good effort. i wish i could talk really fast like that :)
 
Thanks guys!!!

TexRoadkill,
You are not the first to mention more sub-bass. I will add more.

Recording Engineer,
thanks for your critique. I was going for the bright vocals but that is a good suggestion. Let me try changing it up.

sandwiches,
Could it be that I used the same mic MJ used in the Thriller Album?
:)
Is MJ sounding of the voice a bad thing. Could it be the thinness of it?

I am not the singer. I wish I can sing! What do you think of the singer? What do you think of the rapper?

She just turned 16. All the lyrics are by her.
 
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