new one...feedback appreciated

[liv_rong]

Alright folks, here is a new one Im working on. The drums......the sounds are shit I believe, so Im going to find some new ones. I like the samples, but the drums are shit I know.....anyways, Im up for some constructive critisism from your end please.

Much appreciated.

Track is called bedtime, maybe because I should jsut put it to bed hahaha:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=751832&content=music

 

[dacalion]

Im gonna be honest...that ISH is dope in my book, personally I'd give the drums a little more thump and call it a wrap...the melody is HOT, I like the change ups and the flow of the beat is nice and smooth. Great job! I wish I could spit, I'd be after that one rite dere!

dac

 

[liv_rong]

Thanks Dac!

And thanks to everyone else who provided feedback, much appreciated