Plummet,
The intro sounded like the song was gonna be huge. The bass comes and goes a bit, but believe me, I am still struggling with my recorded bass tone as well. Then when the heavy guitars kick in, the mix kinda falls apart. I think that you have a good rock voice. The intro was great as it built up to a huge imagination of what was to come, then I was smacked in th back of the neck when it finally came. It seemed to pick up on an off beat. A tempo change issue maybe. But then there was so much goin on with not enough separation. If you could make the rest of the song have the feel that intro has, you will have a great one. Thanks for the listen,
Fangar