Hi, welcome. I'm kinda' with the previous poster...I can hear talent, and you captured a pretty cool 80's/Killers kind of vibe, but there's something (likely several things) that are giving it kind of a lo-fi yet harsh quality.
Good things: The balance is really not bad. I can hear low end, and I can make out most of the elements...I mean, unless you have bagpipes or something in there, because I hear no bagpipes. Again, if there are bagpipes, you really need to turn them up...I cannot stress that enough about the bagpipes.
The Bad: Now, I mean this in the most constructive way possible. The drums sound absolutely fucking horrible. Like samples from a 1987 casio keyboard. The snare on most of this sounds like a garbage can lid. I don't know how to fix that, but I might have some suggestions if you can tell us a bit more about how you're recording.
On all of the tunes, the vocal needs some work in the compression/enveloping department. It sounds really narrow, like there are no lows whatsoever in the vocal, which I can live with...but not when it gets so loud that it takes my head off. And despite the rancid volume of that vocal (which is sung well, btw)...I can only make out like 40% of the actual lyrics. Either the singer is a mush mouth, or the verb and other vocal treatment is clouding it up a lot.
The drums also sound like they're distorting a lot...not sure what's up with that.
If all of that sounded really negative, it's just a perspective thing. I wouldn't bother if the music was dogshit. Looks like you have about 20,000 more listens than anything I've recorded, LOL. Recording is so much about experience and knowledge and practice. Read all you can and keep mixing...it'll come around.