New indie/rock track - feedback needed fast!

[D-drone]

Sending this song out to some producers in the next few days.

Comments on the song itself, performance and of course the mix would all be really useful.

"Beginner's Luck"

Mp3: http://rapidshare.com/files/231939689/Beginners_Luck.mp3.html

Thanks!

 

[greyharmonix]

alright i'm listening to this one right before dinner. writing while i listen....i'd bring up the drums. yeah everything from cymbals to kick to snare i'd bring up a bit. maybe bring up the low end of the bass. i like the guitars. the vocals are ok too. i actually think they'll fit better in the song once the drums come up. good luck with you producer peoples.

 

[guitar zero]

Agree, more volume on the percussion. Feels like a song that should have a really driving bass, pushing the song forward. It's ok the way it is. Just think the bass could drive this tune.