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lancelot0888
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Please help me by criticizing my voice 

I agree with this. When you breathe normally, you feel your throat is open for the air to flow. When you sing, it should still feel open like when you breathe. Right now it is squeezing shut because the larynx is raising up and also other muscles are constricting the vocal tract. This reduces the resonance space you have to work with and makes singing a whole lot harder than it should be.Getting really good. Seems you are pushing too much to get an effect (I don't want to sound mean, but is sounds like you are trying to push one out), you might want to do it with less strain on your voice and try another approach. I think the results would be better.